I Miss U Elina

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Hii frnds my slf S.gopal frm kendrapara, odisha
mera love story aap sab ko batane ja raha hun, mera girl frnd ka name Elina. Hum ek dushre se bahat pyar karte hain. Meri elina sa mulakat hua tha ek private school pe. Or fast time me usko dekh ke fida ho gaya tha. Aise dekh te dekh te elina ka nmbr mujhe ek frnd ne diya. Me call karna start kar diya. Lekin me aapna address nehin diya aise wrong nmbr se baat kar raha tha. Wo mujhe avode kar rahatha me bar bar call and msg kiya ek din wo man gayi mujh se dosti karne ko. Phir aise bahat baat hua...

dosti se. Ek din baat karte karte 3AM ho gaya tha mere ko kuch alag alag lag rahatha. Kuch ajib si feel ho rahatha main kuch socha nehin direct bol diya.
I love u.
wo pura silent ho gayi
me bar bar puchha lekin wo chup hi rahi kuch samay ka baad wo bi mujhe i love u kaha. Ab hamara pyar bahat khubsurat ho gaya hai. Pura ek saal ho gaya hai. Aor ek sach baat main uski khayal aise rakh ta hun jaise ek chhota larki ki tarha. Ek din bi usse baat band nehi hui e. Ab wo mujhe bahat chahta hai aur me vi.

Submitted By:- SakshiGopal

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174 Responses

  1. kriti

    aaj baat nhi kr skte

  2. kriti

    aaj baat nhi kr skte

  3. kriti

    tlp pr kahan aana h?

  4. kriti

    aapko aam rash psnd h?

  5. kriti

    me bhi a6i hu or aaj dinner me Kya khaya?

  6. kriti

    hii kaise ho?

  7. kriti

    hii kaise h?

  8. kriti

    okay call me

  9. kriti

    ab me or kya sunaau?

  10. kriti

    nhi koi harza nhi hua lekin pata h sb trees to aise udd rhe the ki zameen me se ukhad kr nikal aayenge

  11. kriti

    pr yha pr to kuch din pehle bhut tez tifone aaya tha
    haa mom bed pr leti h pr abhi soyi nhi h

  12. kriti

    aap sunaao ghar me sab kaisa chal raha h aapke or haa kya aapke wha toofan aaya kya 2bara se

  13. kriti

    u r welcome my dear nobita☺

  14. kriti

    so sweet of you nobi😊😁

  15. kriti

    suchhi?

  16. Kriti

    surander mujhe jaankar bhut khushi hui ki aap meri kitni fiqar krte h thank u😊

  17. kriti

    nhi mom abhi nhi soyi h

  18. kriti

    nhi dard to zyaada nhi hua bendez laga liye thaa lekin jalan bhut ho rhi h

  19. kriti

    aaj raat ko me dinner banane k liye vejitable kaat rhi thi to usko kaatte kaatte achanak caaku meri left hand ke ungli pr jaa lagi or kat gyi khoon bhi nikla

  20. kriti

    kuch khaas nhi aapko pata he aaj mene apni ungli knife se kaatli

  21. kriti

    mujhe nhi pata ki unko kab nind aayigi

  22. kriti

    or sunaao

  23. kriti

    nhi hum tb tk baat nhi kr skte jab tak meri mom na so jaay

  24. kriti

    o wow yeh song suna h maine bhut acha song h

  25. kriti

    konsa song?

  26. kriti

    is wqt konsa kaam krungi sirf aapse baatein kr rhi hu or kuch nhi
    aap Kya kr rhe ho?

  27. kriti

    so gye Kya?

  28. kriti

    Kya hua reply kyu nhi kr rhe?

  29. kriti

    hii kaise ho

  30. kriti

    Kya ho gaya reply kro n

  31. kriti

    wow pr kyu aaj koi khaas baat h kya aapke home me?

  32. kriti

    or sunaao ghar ka konsa kaam kiya?

  33. kriti

    acha to ak kaam kijiye aap msg me apni baat likhye or me yha

  34. surander singh

    pata nahi koshish kar rahe hu

  35. kriti

    Kya ho gya comments nhi ho rha Kya?

  36. kriti

    i love kaju, yr mujhe to dinner k sath meethe me kabhi sweets nhi mili

  37. surander singh

    dinner me kaaju ki barfi or gulabjamun or sabji puri

  38. kriti

    are kya ho Gaye

  39. kritika

    are lo aa gyi me

  40. kriti

    hii dinner me kya khaya aaj?

  41. surander singh

    hiii kritika

  42. surander singh

    Comment. hiii kritika

  43. kriti

    kuch nhi good night kal baat karte he

  44. kriti

    o.k. karo

  45. kriti

    sona nhi he to firr kya krna h raat bhar taaro ko dekhte rehna he Kya

  46. kriti

    gussa kyu kr rhe ho mujh pr

  47. surander singh

    Comment nahi

  48. kriti

    sona nhi he Kya aapko aaj raat

  49. surander singh

    Comment. kuch nahi

  50. surander singh

    Comment. chatt par

  51. kriti

    Kya matlb h aapka?

  52. kriti

    mera matlb abhi aap kahan pr ho ghar me ho ya chatt pr ho

  53. surander singh

    Comment. kya karu

  54. kriti

    me to abhi aapke paas hi hu fir miss krne ki Kya zrurat h

  55. kriti

    kahan pr ho abhi

  56. surander singh

    Comment. kya sunaau

  57. surander singh

    Comment. i miss u

  58. kriti

    chodo ye sab or kuch sunaao

  59. surander singh

    Comment. ok 😢

  60. kriti

    firr bhi nhi kr skte

  61. kriti

    kbhi kabaar kisi cheezo pr apna jorr nhi chal pata.

  62. kriti

    please sad mat hoiye

  63. kriti

    koi baat nhi kbhi kisi or raat kr lena masti se baat

  64. surander singh

    Comment. baat karnge

  65. kriti

    Kya nhi

  66. surander singh

    Comment. nahi

  67. kriti

    jaane se pehle good night bolke jaane me Kya taqlif he aapko

  68. kriti

    me so jaau Kya sunny?

  69. kriti

    are yar ro kyu rhe ho?

  70. kriti

    so gye Kya aap

  71. surander singh

    Comment. 😢😢😢😢😢

  72. kriti

    man to h aapse baat krne ka lekin nhi aaj nhi kl raat

  73. kriti

    haa so gayi

  74. kriti

    Kya??

  75. kriti

    amaawesh Kya hota h

  76. kriti

    kal holiday he Kya aapki

  77. kriti

    o.k. or sunaao

  78. kriti

    nhi bilkul bhi nhi me aapko kbhi nhi bhul skti aap mujhe chod bhi do tobhi aapki yaade mere saath rahingi lekin aap to mujhe such me bhul jaoge kyuki biwi ke aa jaane k baad aapka saara dhayan unki hi tarhaf hoga

  79. surander singh

    Comment. nahi me aap ko nahi bhulu ga par aap mujhe bhul jaoge

  80. kriti

    aap sanaiye saadhi ke baad to aap mujhe bhool hi jaienge haina

  81. surander singh

    Comment. or suaa

  82. surander singh

    Comment. chlo koyi baat nahi

  83. kriti

    lekin mujhe nhi lagta aaj raat hume call pr or baat krni chaiye hum kal raat baaki ki baatein krlenge aaj raat sirf chat hi krte h to sahi he

  84. surander singh

    Comment. kya hua

  85. surander singh

    Comment. are aaj raat me let sone wale hu kyuki kal ghar par h yaar

  86. kriti

    balki aaj raat chat hi krte h
    kal raat call pr baat krenge o.k.

  87. surander singh

    Comment. tum miss call kar danaa

  88. kriti

    nhi abhi nhi

  89. surander singh

    Comment. call karu

  90. kriti

    sorry wo meri mom jag gayi thee

  91. surander singh

    Comment. kya hua

  92. kriti

    theek hai karo

  93. surander singh

    Comment. song sunnaka liye

  94. kriti

    kisliye?

  95. surander singh

    call karu

  96. kriti

    or ye song kaisa he

    aao ji dance karle thoda romance karle raat he thandi thandi dilo me aag bharle ek nazara hua pehla ishara hua kisse hazaar ho Gaye

  97. surander singh

    Comment. lataa mangeshkar ka song mast lagta h mujhe

  98. kriti

    lata mangeskar ji ka gaana he suna h?

  99. surander singh

    Comment. nice

  100. kriti

    ajeeb dastan he ye kahan suru kahan khatam ye manzile he kaunsi naa wo samhj sake naa hum mubaareke tumhe ki tum kisi ke noor hogaye kisi ke itne paas ho ki sabse door hogaye…

  101. surander singh

    Comment. kya karne lagh gaye

  102. surander singh

    Comment. nahi sunaa par acha h

  103. kriti

    Kya aapne ye classic song kbhi suna h?

    Aaaaaaa… jaan e jaa aaaa.. mera yeh husn javaan javaa javaan tere liye he aash lagay o jaan e Mann aajaa na!

  104. surander singh

    Comment ohhh nice song

  105. kriti

    saanu ek pal chain naa aawe sajna tere bina.. dil jaane kyu ghabraay o sajana tere bina..

  106. surander singh

    Comment. pura to nahi maalum per song mast h

  107. kriti

    lovely song aapko pata he ki ye song kisne gaaya h

  108. surander singh

    Comment. mile ho tum hum ko bade naseebo se churaye h humne kismat ki lakeeron se

  109. surander singh

    Comment. waah kya baat h nice

  110. kriti

    thanks aap bhi kuch sunaao

  111. surander singh

    Comment sunaa to nahi par mast h

  112. kriti

    sau aasmaano ko or do jahaano ko chod ke aayi tere paas

  113. kriti

    sunny aapne ye song suna h?

    aankhon ko teri aadatt he tu dikhe naa to inhe siqayat he bin chuy chu liye he tune mujhko diye he pyaar k taraane jaanyya yeh jo ab ho rhaa he kuch ajab ho rhaa he Kya yahin pyaar ka he ehsaas…

  114. surander singh

    Comment. or kya kar rahe ho

  115. kriti

    hmmm or kahan ho abhi ghar k chatt pr ho Kya taaro se bhare aasman ko dekh rhe ho Kya

  116. surander singh

    Comment. sahii kahaa

  117. kriti

    waise bhi is duniya me itni jaldi ache rishte tohdi mil jaate h bht mehnat karni padti h ek ache pariwar ko khog kr usse rishta jodne me

  118. surander singh

    Comment. ohhh

  119. surander singh

    Comment. or sunaao

  120. kriti

    nhi baat nhi bani

  121. kriti

    o.k.

  122. surander singh

    Comment. aapke waale ka kya hua

  123. surander singh

    Comment. phil haal to nahi per koshish kar rahe h

  124. kriti

    Kya aapke liye koi naya rishta aaya

  125. surander singh

    Comment. kya sunaau

  126. kriti

    or kuch sunaao

  127. surander singh

    Comment din bhar kaam kar rahaa the

  128. kriti

    kuch nhi aaj bhi din bhar ko time pass kiya or aapne kya kiya

  129. surander singh

    or sunaao din bhar ki baat

  130. kriti

    acha or kya kr rhe ho

  131. surander singh

    roti or aalu ki sabji or milk

  132. kriti

    Roti or paneer ki sabji or aapne

  133. surander singh

    or dinner me kya khaya

  134. kriti

    o.k. or sunaao kya ho rha h

  135. surander singh

    mujhe laga easaa he

  136. kriti

    hii sorry yar kal raat mujhe jaldi nind aagyi thi isliye kal raat 10 bje hi so gyi thee

  137. surander singh

    Comment kya ho rahe h

  138. surander singh

    Comment hiii kritika

  139. surander singh

    Comment. so gaye the kya aap

  140. surander singh

    Comment. raat ko aap aaye he nahi

  141. surander singh

    Comment. hii kritika kasha ho

  142. kriti

    smz nhi ata Kya problem h aapko comments krne me.

  143. kriti

    so kaise thi aapki hone wali wife aapko pasand aayi haa keh diya kya aapne

  144. surander singh

    Comment. pic dakhi

  145. kriti

    yeh to bht achhi baat to koi ldki ki pic dekhi ya fir ladki se mile

  146. surander singh

    Comment do din pahle

  147. surander singh

    Comment. kritika so gaye kya

  148. kriti

    oh wow kab aaya thaa rishta aur kaisa laga aapko?

  149. surander singh

    Comment mare or mare didi ka liye rishte ki baat

  150. kriti

    acha kis khayal me the

  151. kriti

    me nhi aap mere cmnt theek se read kijiye

  152. surander singh

    Comment. aaj me kisi or hi khayal me tha

  153. surander singh

    Comment. nahi kiya

  154. kriti

    are Budhu aap mere cmnt theek se kyu nhi padhte
    mene pucha thaa aapse ki aaj din bhar me mujhe kitna yaad kiya matlb aapne mujhe kitna yaad kiya samjhe kuch

  155. surander singh

    Comment. apne comment read karo

  156. surander singh

    Comment. aapne hi to kahaa ki me apne aap ko yaad kiya

  157. kriti

    yar kbhi kabaar aapki koi baat
    mere pale hi nhi pdti.

  158. kriti

    Kya? apne aapko yaad kiya yar me kuch samajhi nhi

  159. surander singh

    Comment. aap apne aapko yaad kiya kya

  160. kriti

    Kya matlb?

  161. surander singh

    apne aapko

  162. kriti

    or aaj din bhar me mujhe kitna yaad kiya

  163. surander singh

    Comment. sahi h or sunaao kuch

  164. kriti

    ek baat batao aap kuch bhi likhne se pehle comment. aisa type kyu krte ho?

  165. kriti

    koi baat nhi waise aaj tk humne kitni story ke pages badle h haina.

  166. surander singh

    Comment. name nahi dikha mare ko

  167. kriti

    me bhi to isi ki baat kr rhi thi elina waise kaafi secret tarike se story ko jhaahir krte ho

  168. surander singh

    Comment. haa

  169. kriti

    yaha pr

  170. surander singh

    nice

  171. LickezT

    Kyun fix date nehin?aaj kal job ki koi maa baap nehin ?

  172. noor siddhqi

    Wow..shubhaanallah badi bhetrin story hai yeh achi baat hai ki iski ending happy hui.

  173. Pinki naj

    Very nice but marriage jarur karna

  174. Ali🌷

    Nice but very short story !!

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