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mera pyar tha adhura


Hiii…frnds kaise ho aap sab mera naam vikey hai aur mai Bilaspur kha hu aaj mai aap sab ko apne little brother yash ki apne tak hi rahn wali love stori bitane ja raha hu to mai aap ko bita du ki yash ek smpl ldka hai jo ki 14 year ka hai aur wo shivani naam ki ladki se pyar kir baith ta hai yash apni study k liye rudrapur sher me ek room rent pir le kir apne mama papa k sath rahta hai aur study kirta hai yash mere caca ji ka ladka hai aur shivani uss room k malik ki ladki hoti hai jiss se yash pyar kirn lagta hai aur ye sab mujhe yash ne kabhi nhi shr kiya kyu ki mai uss ka bida bhai hu iss liye wo mujh se hamesa dar kir rahta hai apni dil ki baat mere se shr nhi kirta ye sab mujhe uss ki ek school ki purani dairy se pita cala kyu ki mai uss k room pir unn se miln gya tha tab yash ne apni aur shivani ki har harkat us dairy me kaid kir rkhi thi jiss ko dekh kir mere akho se ansoo nikal ate hai to mai bita du ki yash ko kaise hua uss ladki se pyar yash usa ladki se kuch din b
aat nhi kirta ta tha dher2 jaan phcan ho gyi aur wo ek dusre se boln lage yash jab uss k yaha room rent pir puchn gya to uss ne shivani ko dekha n uss ko dekh kir uss ko pyar ki feeling mahsoos huye wo ladki uss ko bhut pasand thi jaise kise bache ko apna pirye game psnd ho thik usi tarh yash ka bhi shivani sabse acha game thi shivani school padne jati thi aur dono ek hi size k the pir unka school alag 2 tha shivani roj subh yash se miln ati thi yash so kir bhi nhi uth ta tha aur shivani uss se milne a jati thi aur uss ko jagati thi aur roj saam ko school se wapas ane k baad bhi wo yash k room pir ati thi aur wo bhi yash ko bhut dekhti thi yash ko esa lagta tha ki wo bhi uss se pyar kirti hai mager bolti nhi hai shivani ka bhai yash ka best frnd tha aur yash uss ko apna pyar ejhaar kirn me darta tha kuch to iss liye ki sayad wo uss se pyar na kirti ho aur uss k bhai ko pita cala to uss se frndsp toot jaye gi aur thesri baat ki wo rent pir tha iss liye lakin yash shivani ko b
ayhad pyar krn lga tha mger wo iss baat se darta tha ki ager usa ne naa kah diya to wo ye sab sahan nhi kir paye ga kuch din baad yash uss k bhai se uss k gher ka no le leta hai aur uss k bhai se chat krta hai raat me bhi lakin shivani uss se chat nhi kirti thi aur 1 year uss...

k ghr pir rahn pir bhi wo uss ko bol nhi saka ki wo uss ko pyar kirta hai lakin uss ko yakin tha ki shivani bhi uss ko pyar kirti hai lekin dono ek dusre ko bol nhi pate hai kuch din baad yash se shivani ki maa room khali kirwa leti hai aur yash apne mmi papa k sath dosre room me rahn lagta hai shivani ne bhi yash k room ki taraf coaching lgwa le thi room khali kirn pir yash k mma ki shivani ki mma se ladai ho gyi thi iss liye shivani yash k room pir nhi jati thi aur us se baat bhi kam ho gyi thi yash tusan k time ata tha ki shivani ko bol sake lakin wo nhi bol sakta tha shivani yash se baat tabhi kirti thi raste me jab wo uss ko bula ta tha wrna wo tusan se gher jati thi yash roj aisa kirta tha ki kbhi
wo bol paye shivani ko maget wo himmat nhi.kir pata hai ek din yash raat me shivani k door pir jata hai aur uss k bhai ko puchta hai ki wo gher hai kya shivani khti hai ki wo nhi hai yash shivani ko abhi bhi nhi bol ska lakin uss ne socha ki wo sms kir k bol dega aur wo shivani se khta hai ki aap sms kyu nhi.krti ho to shivani bolti hai ki mere pass fon nhi hai gher ka hai aur uss me sms nhi hote to yash bolta hai ki mai sms dalwa deta hu to shivani uss ko mna kir deti hai ki nhi wo fer puchta hai to wo fer mna kir deti hai aur yash cala jata hai aur ek din fr se uss k gher pir kuch dene ko ata hai aur door pir khda ho kir wo jiss ko dene k liye ata hai uss ko de deta hai dusri taraf se shivani ati aur yash ko bolti hai yash.kha rahte ho ab to dekhe nhi dete ho yash bolta hai ki mai to yhi hu aur wo cala jata hai yash bhut khush tha uss ki shivani ne ye bola to aur yash ne bhut koshis ki shivani ko i love you boln ki mager wo nhi bol pata hai aur srif uss ki yaad he rah jat
i hai yash k pass yash aaj bhi uss ko khi dekh le to wo uss ka cahra bhula nhi pata apni akho se door nhi kir sakta yash aaj bhi uss ko bhut pyar kirta hai wo uss ko akele me mil kir bolna cahata hai lakin shivani uss ko akele nhi mil sakti to iss tarh wo abhi tak uss ko bol nhi saka ….
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.to dosto ager aap logo ko pyar ki nolig ho to plz cmnt kire ki yash kya kire ki uss ko uska pyar mil jaye

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  • Hlooo

  • Reply nhi karna hai to boldo mai chala jaunga

  • ????

  • Chilll bro, takleef ku kehna madam thoda.side.me hatiye traffic jaam horahi hai :p hahaha

    Bro apna to funda hai k jo b bura lagey ya takleef ho osey care.hi nhi karna chahiye aur mind nhi karna, bus hamesha khush rakho aur khush raho : ) simple hai

  • Hhhmm, koi baat hi nhi karte mujhse, kaise rahunga

  • Nai faiz yar mjaak nai uda rha

  • Jnt ji plz, last baar meri baat suniye

  • Kya bhai bolo kya blna h

  • Hlow frnds kaise hai aap sb

  • Kyaaaa ???

  • Hpy raha karo hamesha

    Bye tc

    @dipu, sry maine aapku pucha hi nhi dipu aapku bolsakta hu ? Sry agar acha nhi laga to

  • Maine tqribn aisa b kaha tha aap k msg per :

    Rish, aapko to pata hai na mai mad hu to mind kaise karunga kuch waise maine kaha b tha pehle b mai mind nhi karta, itna tnsn mat b hpy

  • rish aap ho yaha ?

    Mai bohaaaat deyr se cmnt karraha hu per cmnt aa hi nhi raha yaha

  • byyyy

  • sajna ve azma na mennu kaliyaan raatta ch…2
    mettho na vi ni honi.meri haa tu eeee..
    jaan nu chadd k dass tere leyi ki kar sakdi aa…
    m jaan ni deni meri jaan tu ee
    meri jaan tu eee….

    kaisa h song…

  • bhai ap chay pila do aur rish ap song suna do.

  • thik hu rish & dastan

    tv dek rha hu

  • M good satish and u
    Kya kar rhe ho ?

  • Yes yha abhi 1:35 huaa hai and india me maybe 5:08 bja hoga ?

  • Koi haiiii

  • Hi .. Rish me to lunch kar rha hu and aap

  • Koi-hai-

  • @rish, oye pagli, itne santi mat ho, pagal hu normal nhi hu jo aap ki baat ka bura maanjaunga, maine kaha tha na… so no tnsn b hpy always : )

  • Hi buttt, gry bro hpy bd, buttt aap apne gry bhai ku boht ziyada miss karte ho,

    Shayad unhe kuch prob hai jiski wajhe se wo nhi aa parahe hai ya phir wo busy honge, tnsn mat lijiye aur hpy rahiye jaha b rahein : )

  • Rish jhoot bolna aur sunna pasand nhi mujhe, yaqeen nhi hai to mat karo per mujhe jhoota mat samjho plz 🙁

    Dipu, sry maine pucha hi nhi aapse k mai dipu bolsakta hu aapku ?
    Aur aaj kal sahi se baat nhi karrahe mujhse, naraz hai kya :T

  • hey aaj Garry bro ka bday.

    happy bday..Garry bro..miss u cho much…
    n jiya miss u ..

  • Hellow dosto

  • sabko miss kar rai hu bs kisi ek pe gussa hu.

    ab me unse to kavi bat Nai karungi…

  • @dipu, hhhhuu ! Kisi ne roka hai kya aney se,

    @rish, ji haaaaa gf k sath jana hai, hhhuu ! Meri koi gf nhi

  • by dastan chale bhi gye okkk bad me milte h…….
    nd faiz kya by kaha jane ki jaldi h gf k sath ghumne Jana h kyaaaaa

  • Hellow

  • I think koi nhi ok by

  • ok by jannat

  • jannat ab to tum bollywood ki nesw bhi nhi sunati ho
    pta hai kal asha bhosle aur akshay kumar bday tha

  • Me apke 7par gussa nahi nikal rahi..blki etne dino bad bt krke rona aa rha he…..pata he muje ketni tensan ho rahi thi ki kya patta bhai kese hoge kya kar rhe hoge kaha hoge khana khaye hoge ki nahi thik se chain sukun se soye hoge ki nahi? ..aapko pata he jab aap ye site se chale gye the to muje lagta tha ki ab me ye site pe anaath ho gyi hu ab mera ya

  • Lekin bhai meri mob ka pattern lock ho gya thaapko batai to thi na mai……lekin aapko kya ho gya tha blo.mai to majbor thi na.chah ke v nai aa sakti thi….lekin aapka mob ko kya hua he..mai aapko daily ketna miss krti thi…?
    Wo do din mere liye 2saal ke barabar the…lekin aapko kya pata…
    Apke to hat me apke mob rehti hogi na to km se kam ek cmnt kar dete ki jannatwa me thik hu tu tensan mat lena mai jldi aa jaugi….to me kitna khush hoti..ki mera bhai ne muje bata ke gye he….
    or mere paas to mob hi nai thi achanak se kharab ho gyi thi..
    or ap keh rahe ho ki aap do din nahi aaye yaha pe? Or muje esa lag raha he ki muje ketna din ho gya apse baat krke…bhai mai aapke upar gussa nai nikal rahi hu balki muje taklif ho rahi he rona aa raha he..ki e

  • Ab chalta hu… 🙂

  • Plz maaf kardena aur jnt ji se b keh dena, aap abhi jab chalegaey thee to mai boht ziyada pareshan hogaya tha q k shayad jnt ji mujhse naraz hai aur ab aap !!!

  • yar aisi bhi kya baat h

  • ni hu yr m gusaa.. but aap na ye br2 ek hi bat mat bolo jaane ki..yr jb bhi koi jaane k bare me bolta h to naa really bhot jyada gussa aata h muje…aur agr aap jane ki baat kr rhe ho na to fir plzz mujhse ye mat boliye ki m apko maaf kru

  • Agar waha aap k paas hota to aap k sath pura din sirf batein hi karta, time to boht hai per yaha nhi asakta, aap se ya kisi se whatsapp pe baat hogi tab to bataunga na q nhi asakta, khair chodo ye, ab sach me last msgs hai mere

    Ab chah k b nhi aapaunga aur ha plzz plz plzzzz jnt ji ko mere sarey msgs padhne ko bolna mat bhoolna

  • Hhhmm, shayad aap sahi kehrahe hai tabiyat kharab hone ki wajhe per ye yaad rakhna “meri batein jo kai kehta tha k aisa karo waisa raho waghaira2 ye aap logao k pass hai aur aap loog isper amal(apply) karenge to mai rahunga hi aap k sath aur aap loog mere sath 🙂 ”

    Aur ha aap mujhse naraz ho ?
    Maaf nhi karoge ?

  • nd ap to ho hi bhot jyada bzy person kisi se bat krne ka time hi kyo hoga apke paas

  • Phir kaha chalegaey, mere pass b time kam hai, ab aenge to kaam ki baat no bakwas, ab jaldi aaeeye

  • Pata hai ladkiya ghusse me aur khoobsurat lagti hai :p :p per mere samne kya faida :p hahahahaha sry

  • kahiye kya kehna h

  • Jaldi karo yaar, mujhe kuch kehna hai, warna adhori rehjaeygi baat

  • Rish ji reply kariye jaldi

  • Per afsoos ye hai k mai yaha nhi aasakta, itneeee pyare2 frnds miley mujhe per in k qareeb nhi rehsakta, per koi baat nhi q k meri batein jo kai kehta tha k aisa karo waisa raho waghaira2 ye aap logao k pass hai aur aap loog isper amal(apply) karenge to mai rahunga hi aap k sath aur aap loog mere sath 🙂

  • Aur mai to apne aap ko boht ziyada lucky samjhta hu k aap jaisi cute pali pali gudya jaisa ladki meri frnd hai, mujhe to yaqeen hi nhi hota k mujhjaise pagal bandar ko aisi frnd kaise milsakti hai

  • Pagal honge wo sarey jo aapko pagal kahe, aap to boht ache ho, aur

  • faiz ji apko sry bolne ki jrurat ni h aur m hoti kon hu Jo apko kuch bhi kahu…meri frnds bilkul theek bolti h m hi pagal hu jo kisi ko bhi dost samaj leti hu…m hu hi pagal nd shayad m iss layak bhi ni hu ki koi bhi mujhse frndship kare..sry by

  • Koi to aaoo, rish jnt ji se kaho mujhe maaf kardein

  • Plz 🙁

  • .. :T

  • Rish plz reply karo

  • Sry plz maaf kardena kisi ko kucccchh b bura laga to

    Plz !

  • Nhi, shukriya madam aapka boht boht aur waise maine no. Pehle boht baar diya tha, jisko karna hai wo karsakte thee, khair sry yaar : (

    Jo mu ku aya bakte jata hu, plzzz maaf kardena

  • Sry, na janey kya2 kehdiya, jnt ji se kehdena mere sarey cmnts padhne ko, aaj kal sarey

    Chalta hu bye, sry again

  • really pagal hi ho Jo pagalo k jaise bat kr rahe ho…aur apne shayad dastan ka cmnt read ni kiya vo bole the na ki aap apne nmbr post kr do vo apko wtsup msg karenge…n abhi to ni but kbhi to kr hi lungi ab aur kisi ka to pta ni

  • Mai hi pagal hu khamo kha k piche pada rehta hu diwanao ki tarha, aur dusre hai k hum pe thookte tak nhi : (

  • kyo aap kyo chale jaao yaha se…. n yr m wtsup ni kr skti sry samja Karo naaaaa

  • Ya phir mai chala jaou yaha se ?

  • Hhhuu ! Hhuu ! Hhhhuu !

  • Kab aenge sub, abhi tak koi nhi aey !!!

  • @dstn, nice bro

  • gn dastan by

  • Mana ki teri 1 awaaj se bheed ho jati hai
    Lekin hum bhi aahir hai hmari 1 lalkaar se puri bheed bikhar jati hai
    …….Good night ….. All friend ……

  • ek din maine aap se kaha ki mai aap se bat karna chata hu to apne bade pyar se kah diya ki bhai mai aapke sapne me aaugi aur bat karugi
    ek bar aapne ye nhi socha ki bhai ko kaisa lagahoga

  • Tum gardan jukane ki baat karte ho
    Hum wo hai jo aankh utha ne walo ki gardn prasaad me baat dete hai …!!!

  • Are sorry sati and rish aaj mujse khana jal gya tha or gher me kuch bhi nhi tha and me jab bhaar nik la to mene jha car park kithi wha se kisi ne meri car hi chori karli thi so mene pollice ko call kiya and itna tenson me tha kiya btauu yaar and then me police walo ke sath gya tha fir car ka pta chala so fir me car lene gya tha sale kbine kale or gore chori kar lithi meri car lekin police walo ki help se mil gyi bas abhi aaya gher and bhuk to jese gayb hi ho gai hai ab and bor ho rha tha so aagya yha

  • jannat pta hai jb aap is site se chali gai thi aur 6 manth bad aai thi wo 6 manth bhul gai to mai parday ata tha
    aur roj aap ko mis kiya karta tha wo sb aap bhul gai ho
    ek bat aur bta du mai tumko
    jb ham dono ki pahli bar bat hui thi na to mai us voice ki recarding kar liya
    usme aap ne mujhe bola tha ki
    @ bhai aap bahut bolte ho patar patar @
    yad hai na
    8 manth se jayda ho gye hai wo awaj ko sune

  • Bhai ab tym mila aapko..
    Or aapko itne dn tk meri yad ni aai na..
    Kaha bzy the aap..

    Aap muje bhul gye na

    Han akhir me aapki lgti hi kya hun..mai maru ya jiyu aapko kya..
    aapko meri thori v parwah nahi na ek bar v nahi soche ki mai aapko kitna ms krti thi..?

    Haan bhayi aap thehre bade log bzy admi…or ham kahaan…?

    Aap humse kyo baat karoge?

    Or ab muje kyu bula rahe ho..?mat bulao muje….

    …mai to soch li thi ki ab jab aap aaoge tavi mai yaha aaugi nai to nahi….!
    Lekin ab aap aap aagye ho na….ab aap muje mis kroge bulaoge tavi me nahi aaugi..aapne muje itna rulaya he…itna tang kiya he…ap ap v tang ho paresan ho ..lkin me nhi aaugi
    Taki aapko v pata chale ke mai kitna tang hui thi ktna pareshan hui thi.apke liye..
    Muje ye site par laawaris krke chale gye the..

  • jannat busy ho kya

  • Sorry rish pr bye.
    Kal bat krte h

  • Are, ye battry bi low h.

  • acha kyo ghumte ho??????

  • kuch khas nhi so rha hu

  • bore ho rhi hu aur to kuch ni…ap??

  • hi rish
    h r u?

  • lgta h ki koi nhi h

  • Khana bna ke aaya by

  • Rish
    Sayri to muje bohat pasnd hai pehle se and
    Dill se koi nhi puch ta ke how r u dastan samje
    And sorry 4 late reply coz.. Khana jal ke swaha ho gya tha baba

  • kon ni puchta

  • Hrr pal pe tera hi naam hoga
    Tere hrr kadm pe dunya ka slam hoga muskilo ka saamna himmat se karna dekhna 1 din waqt bhi tera gulaam hoga

  • Tin tin hellow koi hai ?

  • Ok. Dosto baad me mile by

  • koi Nai h sabko miss kar rahi hu baht yar…

  • O jee me tuwade jesa smart ni so all mix.. Haha al right will chat after 1 hour neh

  • And sorry me apne boos naal jareha baadch gal karage 1 hour bas sorry

  • Ha jee me tenu janda hu thoda thoda lekin sanu ne punjabi kdi ne aaye gi kita bhi try karu me just thodi thodi aandi and tuse try kryo sanu ne punja bi sikha ne ki maybe sikh jauu

  • oh Punjabi thodi thodi andi ae koi gal ni m sikha dungi mennu ta aandi e….hahaha

  • Oh u r from rjesthan and tusi ne panjabi aandi hai e ki gal hoi baba vese sanu ne panjabi thodi thodi aandi
    And mereko hryanavi ne aati vo bhasa bole to dimag ki waat lga ta hai

  • oh to kya ap pehle bhi aaye ho Rajasthan

  • really tab to apko hariyanvi language bhi aati hogi na…mujhe hariyanvi bhot bhot jyada psnd h… n muje to onlyyyyyyy Punjabi hi aati h 🙁
    apne kaise sikhi itni language

  • Ye last munth ko aaya tha india lekin 3 din hi rha tha ab sayd 2 saal baad aaunga 1 week ke liye. Tab rajestha aaunga and new city hmesa new time achi lagti hai baba

  • Gujrati to kiya bas mrathi and tameel nhi aati varna bohat si bhasaa e aati hai muje

  • Are koi baat nhi pehle hi bol diya hota ke dastna me kha se hu me nhi bta sak ti usme kiya hai
    Kuch nhi and aaunga vese bhi india me bohat si jga pe jana hai jab aaunga tab rajesthan bhi dekh lunga

  • Very funniyy..
    Vese kitna ajeeb name hai yaar Khairthal ajeeb name hai
    Rajesthan me koi jga hai bhi ke nhi gumne layk..

    • yar isme funny kya h waise sry m yha se ni hu aise hi bol rhi hu…vo m yaha nhi bta skti ki m kaha se hu but iske aas pas hi .sry …
      aur ha Mr. dastan aap kabhi aana rajasthan ghumne phir btana koi ghumne layk jagah h ya ni….waise net pe srch kr skte ho rajasthn me kha2 ghumne ki jgh h

  • Mere mood ke bare me kiya btauu kabhi acha to kabhi bura and net gusaa ho to hi acha chalta hai

  • Hahahaha are ye to bhul hi gya tha wi-fi ko mummy papa ke gher se aa gyaii na ab isliye net fast hai wese aap rajessthan me kha rehte ho ?

  • Meto kabhi kabhi song sunta hu baba and mera mood thik ho gya ab vese bhi no need to hearing sonng baba and aap ka net gussa ho gya lagta hai ab bohat fast chale ga

    • hmmmm wi fi apne mma papa k ghr chali gayi na isliy

  • Kiy rish yaar is time song rooz sunto ho kiya ? Roz na suna kro song bheri ho jaoo gi

  • m iss time songs sunti hu bs

  • Sayd aaj muje lunch me mjaa nhi aaya isliye udaas hu ..
    And don’t worry net to slow hota rehta hai dekh na abhi mera net fast hai baad me slow hoga so
    Kiya kar rhi ho baba

  • kyo kya ho gya jo udaas ho… n yr ye net slow chal rha h

  • Good and u :
    And lagta hai aap ka net low hai mere net ki tarha baba
    And ha yaar aaj to free hu lekin udaas hu kiu udaas hu ptaa nhi

  • h r u??? n free ho lgta h ap aj dastan

  • Ok by

  • Gujar gya wo waqt jab hum tumhare talbgaar the. Ab zindgi ban jaoo to bhi hum kbul nhi krenge …
    Itna bhi dum nhi yaar sayri me koi aata ya nhi abhi tak ?

  • Lagta hai ladke busy hai apni gf ke sath or ladkiya busy hai apne bf ke so jo free hai bina gf bf wale wo kiya kar rhe ho khaho

  • rish ap abi yha ho ya jau mai

  • Hi alll of u how r u
    And faiz yaar sorry mene aap ka coment nhi padha actuliy me jya tar comennt nhi padhta so and just your number post kar dena I will whatssup msg u

  • Khair sry aap logao se baar2 kehne k liye whtsap ka, stranger…

    Koi yaad karna chahe to karey, no zabardasti : )

  • Sry mujhe jhoot pasand nhi isiliye kehraha hu ye k mai yaha nhi aunga kaha tha per miss boht karta hu isiliye ajata hu

    Jnt ji se maafi b to manngni hai, jab tak wo khul k dillll se maaf nhi kardete aur ek smile nhi dete tab tak mujhe takleef hoti rahege

    Sry again jnt ji, mera waisa koi matlab nhi tha plz kuch ghalt mat samjhiye, aap ko waisa kuch laga is k liye boht sharminda hu maafi ka talabgaar hu : ( plz hosake to maaf kardijiye

    Mai bus aap se kuch kehna chahta tha per ab kuch nhi kahunga

  • Dastan bro aapne mere msg ka reply nhi kiya, aap whtsap use nhi karte hai kya

    Vnd bhai aap b nhi ?
    Koi to yaad karliya karo is pagal ku, ladkiyao ki alag baat hai wo majboor hai, per aap loog to cntct karsakte ho whtsap pe

  • Jnt ji plz mujhe maaf kardijiye, jitni b ghaltiya hui mujhse wo sub plzzz

  • Nice.. Story and. Baat rhi ke wo kiya kre jisse uska pyar mil jaye so aap ke bhai ko bas 1 call karna hoga and bta na hoga ya fir uske friend se kho ki aap ke bhai ke dil ki baat us tak pohcha de yane shivani ni ki kisi dost ko kho ke yhas usse pyar karta hai

  • Hii friend plz ap apne bhai se baat kro use thodi si himmat do agr vo ab nhi bola to kabi nhi bol paye ga or uska pyar usi ki nazaro se dur ho jayega ap uske bhai ban kar nhi friend ban kar baat kro agr dar ke nhi bolo gye fir pyar karne ka koi faida nhi I wish ke yash ko unha pyar mil jaye

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