hi friends! mera kritika h 19 years ki CLG student hn …. bat pichle sal ki hai jb clg me mere ex-bf ne mjhe ek senior jitesh(jimmy) se introduce kraya. sry btana bhul gyi mere ex-bf ka naam kartik h normal build boy or bhot ambitious nature ka h.phli meeting me hi meri jimmy se kisi bat ko leke ladai ho gyi to me use mostly avoid krti thi BT kartik k liye to WO jese bde bhai ki tarah tha….or jimmy bhi hamesha mjhe ye dikhne me LGA rhta tha ki WO jb chahe hme alag kr skta h jb bhi jimmy ko pta chlta ki hm date pe jaa rhe h WO hmare plan ko khrab krne k liye kartik ko kisi na kisi kaam me LGA leta tha jb hme lunch pe Jana hota tha to wo kartik to match dekhne bula leta tha jb dinner ka plan bnta tha to party k iliye or jb kartik uski bat manke chla jata tha to jimmy mjhe esi look deta tha jese mjhe jta rha hi uske or mere level me kya farak h mere imagination me to WO us moment pe apni jete ki full t9 celebration krta dikhta tha hadd to tb ho gyi jb mere bday pe bhi usne kartik ko mere sath rhne nhi diya … ab me or nhi ssah skti thi to mene kartik se bat ki lekin WO jimmy k khilaf kuch sunnta nhi tha to at last mene use break up krne k liye bol diya … USNR bhi ek bar bhi palat k mana nhi kiyamjhe roka nhi ..me gusse me wha se chli gyi … bahar cafe me aake beth gyi …mjhe gussa aa RHA tha fir pta nhi kyun bs Rona aane lga lg rha tha ki ese person k sath time waste kiya jise meri koi chinta nhi h … fir tabhi jimmy wha aake mere pas beth gya …. usku hansi meri imagination me jor jor se bj rhi thi BT me surprised rhe gyi jb usne mjhe aansu pounchne k liye apna hanky offer kiya… BT mene lene se MNA kr diya.to usne jabardasti khud hi mere tears wipe kr diye…
me: are you idiot or what… just get lost?
jimmy: shut up and Rona band kr
me:I am crying because of you…
jimmy: meri nhi kartik ki wajah se ..mene bas tjhe dikhaya h ki WO asli me ESA h.
me:tm shareef mat bno smjhe …or yha kyun aye ho celebrate kro tmne at last hme alag kr diya… (khte hue mjhe fir Rona aagya)
jimmy: WO kartik pagal hi h tere jesi ldki meri lyf me hoti to me use apni phli priority rkhta…
me:of course! that’s why tm hamesha meri burai krte ho.
jimmy:mene kbhi kha nhi ya jataya nhi but I love you or me tjhe rote hue nhi dekh skta… tujhe WO kartik chahiye na use me leaunga BT plz Rona bnd kr de …promise
jese usne kha usne apna wada nibhaya kartik mere samne tha usne mjhe kuch kha n hug kr liya…mene na uski bat suni n uske hug...
ko feel kiya…mera mind blank tha mjhe khush hona chahiye tha bt I was crying I don’t know why….
jimmy mere samne tha uske face pe koi expression nhi tha he congratulated me and kartik or wha se chla gya …
ab kuch or din beet gye SB normal hone lga ab kartik mjhe proper time deta tha me ab usse jada sath rhne ki jidd bhi nhi krti thi coz ab meri nazar jimmy ko Jada dundti thi …par WO ab clg me km dikhta tha week me ek bar mushkil se or tb bhi usse bat nhi hoti this kbhi WO ready nhi hota kbhi me .
fir ek din mjhe kaam se clg me rukna pda kartik bhi sath tha me staff room Jane lgi to WO bola WO thodi der basketball khelega to me Jake apna kam krke aajau… to I agreed
jb me staffroom se aa rhi thi to jimmy ko boys locker room se bahar ate dekha ..mene phli bar jimmy ko inn nazar se dekha like meri eyes uski body ki details dekh rhi ho mene phle kbhi dhyan nhi diya that bt he had a really nice muscular stature bilkul jesa mjhe pasand h upar se he was sweaty all over… I can’t deny uss ek moment me I was attracted to him physically… fir mene apne devil thoughts ko side kiya n I found out we were standing facing each other 2 min tk koi nhi bola… I was nervous shayad usse smjh aa rha the ki me ese kyun behave kr rhi thi
jimmy:hi
me: hhhhh h hi!
jimmy:(he looked into me) tu ESE behave kyun kr rhi h …
me: kkkkkese me to normal behave kkkr rhi hun
jimmy: oh! us din Jo mine kha us wajah se ….joke tha joke I was kidding…
me surprised thi I didn’t know what to say… then he added n changed his comment….
jimmy:I mean mere liye nhi bt tu us sab ko joke hi maan or kartik k sath khush rh ..rhi bat meri feelings ki to WO tere liye kbhi change nhi hongi… isliye I ll always support you ….
he was so close to me mjhe Pta hi nhi chla KB itna pas aa gya like he was about to hug me bt fir ekdm se dur hoke chla gya
now I was confused as well… what to believe he was joking or not…..me bs usse jate hue dikhti rhi jb tk WO nazro se ojhal nhi ho gya .. usne ek bar bhi palat kr nhi dekha…
next day CLG ponchi to dekha students ki bhed lgi h bahar everyone looked worried kuch to bat thi mene kisi se Pta chla jimmy ki bike ka car se accident hua h or usse hospital le gye h …. I was in shock or shock suddenly tears me badal gya unknowingly I was crying to death I was like ice not moving at all not listening to anything………..
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dipa
WAITING FOR YOUR SECOND PART….PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Lovepreet Singh
खामोश बैठे हैं तो लोग कहते हैं उदासी अच्छी नहीं,
और ज़रा सा हंस लें तो लोग मुस्कुराने की वजह पूछ लेते है।
dipika parmar
I mean smile Bahot acchi lagti h meri hahahah
nishu miss u yar.
dipika parmar
accha ha meri next tarif me ..meri smile Pe jyada dhyan dijiega..Meko na meri ile Bahot acchi lagti h Hahahaha…ok…
accha chalo I m chali ..bye frds tc
dipika parmar
vese mera andaz bat karne ka accha laga vahhhhh I m khush hui hahahaah
vese Muje Urdu words jyada smj me Nai aate..vese.meri bat karne ka andaz pasand aya kisi ko to hahahah
Meko accha laga itni tarif sunke…chalo koi Nai …dipika tum sayad special ho ..h r d best Hahahaha
dipika parmar
hey frds….h r u all???
accha ji he Krishna apne bura kiya..muj akeli me itni sari khubiyan dedi ..note fare Hahahaha..
vese sacchi kahu to sab kehte h meri smile must h ..chalo kisine to itni tarif ki..hahahah I like it…
vese tajmahal Nai banna Muje vo pyar ki nisani thi par sacchai kuch alag hi thi..so Muje koi tajamahal Nai banna ..Muje to sizuka banana h..cute vali hahahaah..
vese ab meri tarif ka setion khatam hi gaya ho to ..koi aa jao mujse bat karo…
hehehhe
hey anshu kaha ho sir???
Nisha
Hii friends kese ho ap sab??
Hii jainy
J@INY
Hii Guyzzz…. Hwz u all ????
J@INY
very sad story….
Lovepreet Singh
बर्बाद होने के और भी रास्ते थे ,
ना जाने मुझे मोहब्बत का ही ख्याल क्यूँ आया |
Deepu
soo sad story ending soo sad …..
Nisha
Hii friends kese ho sab
choot chato land pakdo
irfaan bhai time aayega aapko bhi pata chalege ki ye naam baddtammez q tha or q mene isey ye naaamse nawaaza ………………………………..!
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.main kuch baat kahun aapse chlo ek chtisi baat kehta hun joke ye baat samajh kar shayd yahnke log mujhe pehchan jayenge inshaa allah….?
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jabb raam ki biwi yaani seetha ko usne jeeth kar
apne aajodhyame badehi shahiraana andaazose dhoom dhaaamse zaada sona chandi baant baant kar unhone raaj me phirse seetha yani unki beewiko welcome back kiya tha …………tabb raam itne khush the ki poocho math unko ye mehsoos hua ki unki har woh mehnat woh taqat kaamyaaab huyi……
behad khushi hogai or hona bhi chahiye …..socho jabb apni girl friend ko koi ek baar aaja karke koi kehde to hum kya kamm gussa honge wahee par unko maardunga kaatdunga phaad dunga ye dil karta h………………………….!
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.to zaahirsi baat h raam ne bhi untna gussa kiya tha us raavan par jab seetha ko 14 saal lanka me rehna padah kisko bardaash hoga batao bhai……..
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.aap samajh rahe honge ki ramayan ko lekar main aplogoko q enterfr karraha hun…………!
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.baat ye hai ki raam ko jitni khushi mili seetha mayyako phir wapas paneki …..untni zaada unko ghum mila instantly….woh aisa ke seetha to paak saak saaf or shud thi or ye baat raam bhi jaante the par kya karein ………………..!
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usii time par poori jantane poori duniyane ye kaha raam ko ke seetha ” ASHUDD” h woh na paak h wo kissee orke saat rehkar aayi hai…………….!
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tabhi raam ne duniya ko apni izaad pane kiliye seeth ko jungle me bhej diya poore 14 saal k liye.
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tadapta rehgaya raam unki haatse nikal padi unki zindagi …….unke chro or kaal sama chhgaya..tha.
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.matlab ye hai ki kuch gande nihaiti galeech na ma na behan na chchi na maasi na daadi na aisa koi hai jinko unhone gandi gaali nhi di ….unka naam to main nhi lunga…………….qk woh insaan ek num ke dilse gande hain jo insaan apni ma behan ki izzat nhi krta woh kya kisiee doosronko izaat dega.
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sirf mera naam choot chato land pakdo kehnese hi insaan ganda nhi hota dost …innsaan ki soch or dil aatma gandi hoti jo hi hota h………..!
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irfan tumne mujhe badtameez kaha ok im not angry
but ek bat jabb apki behan yah aapki maa ko koi gali dega tab aapka muh mahatma gandhi ka naam lekar apna dusra gaal dikhouge yah……………..yah unko bhi gaali doge kya aapka muh rukh jayega ye sunkar ke aapki behan yah bhi yah mom ko koi gali dega to……………………..!
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im sorry gz main ganda hun besharam nihaiti kameena mujhse dosti karoge…………….?
choot chato land pakdo
oye hoye kya baat hai kya taarif hoahi h meri saatme kuch nafrat bhi or dukh bhi ……..!
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.thq friends mr.irfan mujhe badtammez ke naamse aapne jaan chalo koi to hai jo mujh besharam ko ek naam se pooraraha h……………..!
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.wese ek baat kahun irfan bhai aap to behadd tameez or tehzeeeb wale shaks nazar aatein hain. yaar aapne mujh zaise insaan par comments karke apna muh ganda q karliya irfan mujhe dukh hua ke apka shayd mere naamne dil dukha diya……….!
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.woh kya haina irfan bhai sahaab hum na zara besharmo mese hain or hum na dilme kuch or dimmag me kuch nhi rakhte islye kya haina woh ki hum sabh ssach boldte hain.
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dipika mdm kitharah wallah wallha kya shahirana
andaaz hai unka batein karneka ki jobhi insaan unse batien karein to ek hi palme unse mohabbat karne lage kya jaadu hai unke baathome jo har insaan unki chahatga deewana hojatha h.
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unki har woh meethi batonme har koi chahe woh ladki ho yah ladka unpar behadd hokar aakarshit hojata h………………………………..!
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.woh ek aisi tazmahal hain jo unko har koi maohabbat krenko marta hai…..
magar afsos ki woh harrkiseeko apne dilme jaga nhi deti, kitna tadapte hain insaan unke ek msg k reply ke liye jab woh apna reply ahahahahah karke hamesha hasske deti hai to maano insaan ye sochne lagta h ke woh abb sukooon me hai or abb usne petbhar khana khaya………………………..!
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.dipika ji ka kya kehna bhai woh h aisi izzaddar ladki ke koi bhi ishq karneme tarasta h.
harpal massalaedaar baatonme shahiraana andaaz me dil kasheeen muskaaan se or naa jaaane aise kitne jalwe hain dipika mdm me jo unpar unke krishn ne unko tohfeme diye hain…………………………!
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dipika ji bht acchi hain aapko to tazmahl ke saat nawaazna tha ghlati kardiya uparwala…..
choot chato land pakdo
ooooooooooohhhhhho how r u friend sabb mere peeche
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.yaar hamesha ye merehi kismat me q milta h pehla comments
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.chalo im 1st the choot chato land pakdo